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Perjured Realism by DeeShine Perjured Realism by DeeShine
This is not a WIP.
The traditional completed artwork of my literature series, "I just stared at it" Moments passed and I kept sitting on my old chair, hugging my legs to my torso. "It seemed like my emotions spilled from anywhere." Toward me the canvas on the wall remained, and the story returned. "I didn't mean to do any harm to you" I whined and hugged my legs tighter. The salty liquid kept running. "I know I left you out but I was in need" Inside of me anger was cooking. I screamed at her but words weren't visible.  "I'm… I'm… HUMAN!" I swallowed my wastes and hasted "I'm not like you... You're perfect and… Finished and look at your room so... So furnished and clean" I looked to the living r "Beloved Woman on the Canvas", talking about a painted woman that psychologically attracts men that are in her apartment.

22/6/10 - refined (thanks guys for all the great feedback!)
23/6/10 - refined (tortillon touches)
*Sketched using HB and B sketch pencils.
(It was a great practice for handling with hair.)
[Drake - Find Your Love,
Ne-Yo - Turn this into Love,
Beyonce' - Why Don't You Love Me]

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:iconly2011:
LY2011 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2012
You're so amazing and talanted!! im speachless! think that everyone who will see your work will say that u will have future in art...
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thecarlosmal Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2010  Professional General Artist
I like how there's a contrasting difference in tone between the two. Good job. Oh and there's a scanning error (I guess that's what close to the woman's chin, I don't know if you noticed it before.
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:icondeeshine:
DeeShine Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
thank you! and yes I need to fix that sometime. LOL
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:iconrututu:
rututu Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2010
Amazing :heart:
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:icondeeshine:
DeeShine Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
thank you :tighthug: ^^
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Morpheusdream Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2010
I STARED AT IT. THEN I READ BELOW... AND LOVED THE CONCEPT.
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:icondeeshine:
DeeShine Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
thank you, Morph ^^ :hug:
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:iconmorpheusdream:
Morpheusdream Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2010
Your Welcome, would you like to check out my gallery?:P
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:icondeeshine:
DeeShine Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
sure :]
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Matheus-Vilaca Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2010
So sensual, loved it!
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:icondeeshine:
DeeShine Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
thank you, Matheus P:
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:iconvivid-funk:
Vivid-Funk Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2010  Professional General Artist
Another classic!
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:icondeeshine:
DeeShine Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
:]
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:iconvivid-funk:
Vivid-Funk Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2010  Professional General Artist
You know its true too!
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:icondeeshine:
DeeShine Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
I'm still practicing ^^ but thank you, Vivid :tighthug:
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Vivid-Funk Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2010  Professional General Artist
Your welcome.
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everyonesinsane Featured By Owner May 31, 2010
very nice :)
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:icondeeshine:
DeeShine Featured By Owner May 31, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
thanks ^^
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LightsOnLuna Featured By Owner May 30, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Absolutely BRILLIANT!!!
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:icondeeshine:
DeeShine Featured By Owner May 30, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
thank you so much ^^! :hug:
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:icondevineworrior:
devineworrior Featured By Owner May 29, 2010
Very nice.
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:icondeeshine:
DeeShine Featured By Owner May 29, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
thanks ^^
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devineworrior Featured By Owner May 30, 2010
Anytime please remind me later to finish checking
out your gallery and comment on some of my work.
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:icondeeshine:
DeeShine Featured By Owner May 30, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
I'll be glad if you do ^^
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devineworrior Featured By Owner May 30, 2010
Anytime sure.
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glarionac Featured By Owner May 28, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hello there, this is ~glarionac from #the-OC-maniac critic crew. Here comes the critic.

From the top right of the picture, the lips of the female bugs me a little. It's as if she becomes a little chubby with not too clearly defined chin. The reference picture shows a bit curvier line, and the lower part of the lips is also wider, not too thin. The second one is her fingers. The first thing I noticed is that the joints on her thumb lacks shading, makes it appear slightly swollen. Then I also find her ring finger and little finger rather off. Since the outline shading for the man's ear is unclear, the girl's ring finger looks like it suddenly becomes curvy and gets smaller on its tip. In opposite, the little finger looks rather big, and not as flat as the reference. Then I noticed that you also didn't give clearly defined ends for those fingers, makes them look as if they grow to the inside of the man's hair. One more thing about the anatomy is that I find the girl's arm in your drawing becomes curvy from the wrist, while on the reference it's flat. The line gets curvy even before it reach the man's shoulder. Not really that curvy, but it's noticeable when people look at the picture at second glance.

That's anatomy. Then I'll talk about the shading. Being a realism artist, I believe you know that shading in realism can decide how close your art to the reference pic more than anime drawings. I should say, that in this drawing, your shading is harsh. I can see the crosshatching here and there, and the shading on the background near the man's forehead looks unfinished. The man's body looks as if he was beaten with something, especially his back and his forehead, and I also noticed some rough lined on his neck. And oh, if this is not a WIP, I suppose there shouldn't be scaling squares on the girl's face and hand.

So, that's all. Other than that, your picture is already good. I'm sorry if there are my words that sounds harsh or insulting, because I didn't mean that. I just try to give the best critic I can.

Have a nice day :aww:
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krazysidhe Featured By Owner May 27, 2010  Professional Artisan Crafter
I love the idea behind this work. The work is great to. ;)
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:icondeeshine:
DeeShine Featured By Owner May 27, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
thanks ^^!
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krazysidhe Featured By Owner May 27, 2010  Professional Artisan Crafter
You're most welcome. :Hug:
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:icondeeshine:
DeeShine Featured By Owner May 27, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
:hug: ^^
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krazysidhe Featured By Owner May 27, 2010  Professional Artisan Crafter
^_~
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do0dz Featured By Owner May 26, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
wow ! supergreat ! :)
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:icondeeshine:
DeeShine Featured By Owner May 26, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
thanks :]
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al-tele Featured By Owner May 26, 2010
Definitely one of my favourites :blush:
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:icondeeshine:
DeeShine Featured By Owner May 26, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
:]!
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artistgaziry101 Featured By Owner May 26, 2010   Traditional Artist
i love it!
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:icondeeshine:
DeeShine Featured By Owner May 26, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
^^! :hug:
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dmonghost Featured By Owner May 26, 2010   General Artist
nice version. Very passionate.
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:icondeeshine:
DeeShine Featured By Owner May 26, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
thank you ^^.
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MaverickKay Featured By Owner May 26, 2010
I really like the way you drew this compared to the reference <333 And the cropping works really well as well as the close-up. x3 It makes the scene a lot more dramatic, especially if she is from a painting.
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DeeShine Featured By Owner May 26, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
thanks!
yeah, I worked on cropping a while on the sketch. I'm glad you noticed it ^^
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MaverickKay Featured By Owner May 26, 2010
I thought it worked out nicely in this x3
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glarionac Featured By Owner May 26, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
It's awesome :love: I love how delicate your sketch look~
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:icondeeshine:
DeeShine Featured By Owner May 26, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
thank you! ^^!
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glarionac Featured By Owner May 26, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You're so welcome! :la:
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primulatook Featured By Owner May 26, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
beautiful!
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:icondeeshine:
DeeShine Featured By Owner May 26, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
thank you so much ^^
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misscheek Featured By Owner May 26, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is beautiful, you have clearly practiced hard and it shows, this work is so relaxed and comfortable.
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:icondeeshine:
DeeShine Featured By Owner May 26, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
thank you so much :hug:!
^^
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